Nice!
As simple as they are, every time I make one I have to spend some time remembering exactly what to do. One thing I never bother with is finishing the edges of the inside material. It frays, but so slowly that it's rarely an issue. The sack in the photos below is for a sleeping bag. It's over seven years old.
I like to add a grab flap at the bottom. It's easy to do (once I remember how to do it).
I think it helps a lot when pulling out a down bag or jacket:

Also a round flap on top is kind of nice:

I once made one with a round bottom, flat felled seams, everything nicely finished and even a metal grommet for where the cord emerged from the sack. It was a gift; I'd never go to that much trouble for myself.